FOOLS RUSH IN

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For Brokenspinearts November 2024

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PoemsAbout #YourSong @paulrobertmullen82.bsky.social and @alanparry83.bsky.social

Here’ my prose song poem on, Fools Rush In.

Magnetic! This layered piece hums with passion and heartbreak, blending longing with sensuality. The switch from cosmic desire to raw loss felt bracing. I lingered on the narrator’s vulnerable honesty. #KeepWriting #PoemsAbout #YourSong

METAMORPHOSIS

My response to TopTweetTuesday about Clothing

https://x.com/janehfitz1/status/1841026609697956264?s=61

MarionAshton @ Memashma replied-

Love how the poem is clasped by the two jackets, Jane. It works well – as do the descriptions of the alternative character aspects. The dark one ‘buttoned up tight’ whereas the vivid pink one is ‘stripping the bonds’. Strong message – go for a bit of colour at times!